Commuter Train


jenright

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Line 2 and 4 of stanza 1 are "distress"/"happiness";

line 1 and 3 of stanza 3 are "happiness"/"distress."

Very blah to my ear. And it doesn't look like a similar repetition of rhyming words occurs in the Russian.

Not only infelicitous,

But borderline duplicitous.

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